Friday, October 07, 2005

A Red-White Tree

In an airplane
Flying over the clouds.
Looking at the world.
Small
and
Green,
like a piece of cloth.
A lonely tree among them all.
Yellow colored,
Shallow look
Making me feel hooked.
A tree among the trees,
Unique,
fantastic
fruitful
and beautiful.
...
No birds flying over her.
No Sunlight crossing her,
Only Green Trees surrounding her.
From a top view,
Seems like a yellow dot in a green dress.
Alone and stressed
with the Trees

Does She think it's Fall?
or is she dying to find him?
Her Leaves are falling now...
Getting ugly for winter.

And Now...
The green dress is full of yellow dots,
taking apart the knots.
but still,
She is the ugliest of them all.

Snow falls
shrinking her.
No more Sun
No More fun!
At night...
All Trees looking at her down
Before the dawn
To be born.

No Birds nest
But it's god's test
Life full of tests and tricks.
Hunting her for a long trip.

Starting to feel warm,
Getting calm
Getting Dressed for Spring
Leaves growing,
flowers blooming.
Sunlights engulfing her.
Dressing...
red,white leaves.
Slim strong branches.
no crunches!
"Wow"
"How!"

No Wonder
Green Trees Looked at her down.
Jealousy killed the beauty.
Envy to some is a bounty.

going higher
Reaching the sky
looking for him
Again and
over Again.

Now realizing the unseen.
A red-white Dot in the green dress.
Alone but with brightness.

wondering after 23years.
Where is my tree?
among all the trees.
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Note: sorry I wrote this fast, before I went to bed, and my personal opinion, I dont like this poem! let me know what you think!...Goodnight all..very late here.

1 comment:

Tr@fficJ@m said...

"Does she think its Fall,
Or is she dying to find him?"

This is the best part!

How do U come up with this stuff??!!!


Tr@fficJ@m